literature

Self-Restraint

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Published: Sep 19, 2014

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Literature Text

My mind, the bottle
With a hundred cracks, binding
The devil inside

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A genuine Senryu. Although there isn't any juxtaposition of imagery, the last line did provide a twist in the emotion you are portraying. The awareness of what is happening. I found it easy to appreciate and rather intense. You can write powerfully, for sure. Thankyou for sharing this marvel.

Regards,
John.